I never been fond of writing. I always struggle getting the basics of it. Recent papers that I have receive feedback my professor was not good at all. The problems that I have with my paper is organizing, punctuation, grammar, and I always get a comment saying read out loud. It hurts knowing that most of my papers have been rejected, but I know that I still have time to correct and fix the problems in my paper. One of my worst papers that I recently done was my second paper this semester, my argumentative paper.
   
      My second paper I wrote about how gaming can relieve stress. I thought it was a decent start, but my professor told me that it was a rough start even for a first draft. My topic is not arguable because that's really a known fact that games relieve stress. My organization was terrible, I went from talking about games to television and technology. I even messed up when describing the different types of games and how they can relieve you from stress. To make matter's worse, I only covered one part of my thesis statement which was stress, but I did not include regaining mental stability and changing the perspective of the situation. When I looked at my professor reviews and seen the comments I was heartbroken, however it was very helpful. I've seen what my professor and other professional writers would see. I may start over on that paper for good, but I know that it will be worth it when I look at the grade. That is all I want, a well deserved and hard earned grade.